Sketchbook and Artwork of Kelly Aleshire
That is coming a long nicely Kelly, The only thing throwing me off id that the cool girl is in the fore ground and the warm girl is in the back.Chicky on the left has an adorable face, Keep it up, lookin good so far.
I think it's comin along quite well. i would copy and paste their faces onto the sword reflection :D
i'm liking the idea you have for the composition and the foreshortening makes it nice too. I'd watch out for their heads, they seem a little small. I agree with the comments about the faces, keep working on it!